[ACCEPTED]Mannen's Application

**OOC portion**
Steam username: Master123605(Mannen)
SteamID: STEAM_0:0:11842479
Ban history: None
Past RP experience: Around 2-4 years, not really sure. I know how to Roleplay greatly.
Past CP experience: SeC(My own server) 03(StK Roleplay). My 03 is a medic.
RP example: (Anti-citizen scenario)
Me: Anti-citizen.
Me: Take cover!
*/me opens fire on the Anti-citizens.*(S2M)
Me(RADIO): Anti-citizens on the catwalk! Requesting backup!
(RADIO): Copy that.
(RADIO): Inbound.
*Backup arrives*
Other Unit: Where is he?
Me: Up there!
*/me points to the catwalk.*
*The other units open fire on the Anti-citizens*
*One Anti-citizen drops dead and falls off the catwalk*
*The other Anti-citizens retreat.*
Me: Anybody wounded?
Other Unit: I got shot in the leg.
*I walk up to him and Examine his wounds*
*I then take out a piece of cloth and some alcohol*
*I clean his wounds, then I get the bullet out with a pincette and then I apply bandage and eventually a health kit/vial to them*
*I then give him some painkillers*

(Anti-citizen Perspective)

*As the anti-citizens walk out on the catwalk, they are spotted by an unit(me).*
*The unit(me) alerts everyone around him to take cover.*
(AC = Anti-citizen)
AC 1: Shit! Take him out!
*The other AC's starts shooting at the unit(me).*
*The unit(me) alerts the other units via the Radio.*
AC 2: He radioed for backup! Expect more Civil Protection assholes on the way!
*As the other units arrive, the gunfire starts again.*
*The third Anti-citizen gets hit.*
AC 3: ARGH!
AC 1 and 2: Jack!
AC 3: Go on without me! GO! NOW!
*The third AC(Jack) falls dead off of the catwalk.*
*As the other AC's run away, they stop for second.*
AC 1: Oh god, not Jack!
AC 2: *sighs* Yeah, he will be missed. But atleast I put a bullet in one of them motherfuckers. So that should do for now.
AC 1: Yeah, let's get the payback later. This is gonna be good.
*AC 1 and AC 2 run back to their base.*


Character backstory: My character grew up in a city filled with crime. The suburbs were full of grafitti and there were gangs everywhere. It actually was a bit of a salvation after the 7 Hour War. The gangs were split up and everything was peaceful for a short while. Though The Combine were brutal and ruthless, my character never resisted. He was rewarded through increased respect and eventually he reached the status of a loyalist. But what happens in City 29 stays in City 29.
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**IC portion**
Name: George Michaelson
Age: 21
Birth year: 1990
Past crimes: None
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [X] No [ ]
If yes, which (or both) and explain: Loves constructing items and repairing them. Good medical experience.(He saved an units life by cleaning his wounds with alcohol and bandaging him up until the Medical units took care of him.)
Why do you want to join the Union?: Because I understand how hard it is for you and I wish to assist you in the greatest way possible. I know that there is still Criminal Scum out there. And I want to deal with them in the greatest way possible. Whether it means Amputation or Not. I will do it. But for now, I can't come up with more words to explain.
Any other information you wish to share?: I love CQC, but don't expect me to just rush into there guns blazing. CQC is Dangerous, and I prefer staying alive.

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(OOC)I really enjoyed writing this(OOC)

**OOC portion**

RP example: *Anti-citizen scenario*
Me: Anti-citizen.
Me: Take cover!
*/me opens fire on the Anti-citizens.*(S2M)
Me(RADIO): Anti-citizens on the catwalk! Requesting backup!
(RADIO): Copy that.
(RADIO): Inbound.
*Backup arrives*
Other Unit: Where is he?
Me: Up there!
*/me points to the catwalk.*
*The other units open fire on the Anti-citizens*
*One Anti-citizen drops dead and falls off the catwalk*
*The other Anti-citizens retreat.*
Me: Anybody wounded?
Other Unit: I got shot in the leg.
*I walk up to him and Examine his wounds*
*I then take out a piece of cloth and some alcohol*

*I clean his wounds, then I get the bullet out with a pincette and then I apply bandage and eventually a health kit/vial to them*
*I then give him some painkillers*

Could you give a bit more information about when and how he got shot, some of the Anti-Citizen conversation/actions, etc?

[quote="CrackedMarbles"]

Could you give a bit more information about when and how he got shot, some of the Anti-Citizen conversation/actions, etc?

Well, in this example they are too far away to be heard, and their actions are obvious.
How the guy got shot? If you mean the Anti-citizen, every unit around me shot him.
If you mean the Unit, he got shot by an Anti-citizen. I don't know what to explain there really.

Add their actions. Show your ability to RP both sides. Whether they can be heard on the server or not it's nice to see RP on both sides.

NuggetandSkull wrote:Add their actions. Show your ability to RP both sides. Whether they can be heard on the server or not it's nice to see RP on both sides.

*As the anti-citizens walk out on the catwalk, they are spotted by an unit(me).*
*The unit(me) alerts everyone around him to take cover.*
(AC = Anti-citizen)
AC 1: Shit! Take him out!
*The other AC's starts shooting at the unit(me).*
*The unit(me) alerts the other units via the Radio.*
AC 2: He radioed for backup! Expect more Civil Protection assholes on the way!
*As the other units arrive, the gunfire starts again.*
*The third Anti-citizen gets hit.*
AC 3: ARGH!
AC 1 and 2: Jack!
AC 3: Go on without me! GO! NOW!
*The third AC(Jack) falls dead off of the catwalk.*
*As the other AC's run away, they stop for second.*
AC 1: Oh god, not Jack!
AC 2: *sighs* Yeah, he will be missed. But atleast I put a bullet in one of them motherfuckers. So that should do for now.
AC 1: Yeah, let's get the payback later. This is gonna be good.
*AC 1 and AC 2 run back to their base.*


(See my RP example and then you will understand.)

Please edit it into your old app.

CrackedMarbles wrote:Please edit it into your old app.

Can't do that, would take shitloads of time editing my post. And I gotta go back to school in an hour.
Just imagine it in there, because it would be a pain in the ass to edit all of those lines.
And I wouldn't remember where to put the lines either...

Sorry.

Just copy the segment of RP and then designate a part in your example as their RP. It's nice to see their side of the story so seeing it /in/ the app is better than not seeing it in it.

Ah! Alright, I'll get right on it.

i dunno about any of you others, but I'd kinda like to see it like the gamemode writes it.

Ex:
[Short, Blonde H...] falls dead off of the catwalk.

CrackedMarbles wrote:i dunno about any of you others, but I'd kinda like to see it like the gamemode writes it.

Ex:
[Short, Blonde H...] falls dead off of the catwalk.

That is not requied here.

I know it isn't, but it's something that really stands out for me.

We need newer CPs and Mannen has made the effort to sit on the server when no one is on. I don't see why not. Can't wait to RP with you again some time.

[Accepted] Now for Nathan.

Agreeing with nugget. [ACCEPTED]

You will recive this next time you are on the server when I or Nugget is on.