[DENIED]Leevim's Metropolice Application

**OOC portion**
Steam username:Leevim
SteamID:STEAM_0:1:16477528
Ban history: Im never got banned.
Past RP experience: Im played roleplays like 1 year...
Past CP experience: Im helped cp's to take minges and get loyalty points in tetragaming hl2rp server.
RP example: Unit tries to take 9mm pistol from table, But citizen shoots his hand with 9mm pistol. Then citizen come closer and knocks the unit down. Another units hear unit die, Then units run in the city. Units found the unit body. Citizen walk up in city's plaza and takes 9mm pistol and attempt to shoot units. When units come closer, Citizen pulls 9mm trigger. *CLICK* 9mm pistol ammos is out. Then citizen will be amputated.
Character backstory: When connor walk in his home street, He get knocked down by random citizen. When connor wakes up, He see citizen with black mask. Then citizen speaking for connor. And civil protection smash the door, And they take connor in city 18.
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**IC portion**
Name:Connor Pendergrass
Age: 25
Birth year: 1990
Past crimes: None.
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [ ] No [X]
If yes, which (or both) and explain:
Why do you want to join the Union?: I will help another cp's, Protect city and search for suspect's.
Any other information you wish to share?: None.

Hm. I see a lot of errors in your English, and the backstory doesn't really tell me how he got to our city. (We're City 16.) It'd be nice if you could add a bit of detail to your sentences and double-check them for errors. Sometime ingame, I'd like to see you ingame, to see how well you roleplay.

Not the best app. The IC portion is pretty weak and your grammar isn't strong. Work on your spelling, your IC portion, and I want to see you RP on the server.

Ok, I said to owner too my app sucks.

Denied permanently for raging when not getting CP to Nathan and being a butthurt Finnish kid.